Tuesday, 4 September 2007

med1,group3

If I Had The Chance To Grow Up All Over Again

If I had the chance to grow up all over again
I'd smile and laugh more and cry less.
I'd do less complaining and more appreciating.
I'd take you near and close to my heart.
I would care to ignore less and to concern more.
I'd take more caring and learn more loving.
I'd stop argue and hug my mother.
I would share my thoughts and hear your advice.
I'd do more help and less to ask.
I would be there for you and cheerful.
I'd build a castle and give it to you.
I'd care about love,
And more about you...

From:
Norazihan
Huda
Amylia
Syifak

5 comments:

hidayati said...

I think, it should be more interesting to read a shorter poem mith meaningful words in every stanza..

syahid said...

salam,

it is beautiful poem...

kucing_red said...

its a beautiful poem but who is you in the poem????? i'm confused...is it me?????

cuppycake said...

quite interesting poem,,unfortunately,we cannot rewind all the past...

tariq_ziad said...

salam
it is a nice poem
but
who is 'you' in the last stanza?