Tuesday, 28 August 2007

sc1,group3

He did not know how to tell her that he did not want to see her anymore. Therefore, he wrote a letter to her to end their relation because he knew he could not be her prince charming as he came from a poor family that had nothing except an old wooden house in the estate. In addition , the girl, Julia came from a very rich family.

Although she was born with a silver spoon in her mouth, she never proud of herself an kept going on making friends with other people included him. However, her father, Mr Robert who was the owner of the estate did not like her to be friend with the low class people and he always treat them like animals.

Therefore, on that day, Romy wanted to end his love with Julia and stop all the bad treats that Mr Albert gave to his family by sending the letter that he only wrote "Go to hell!! I hate you! "
Therefore, he ran as fast as his feet can carry him to Julia's luxurious bungalow which situated only one kilometer from his house to sent the letter that would completely change hi life forever. Then, when he reached the huge bungalow, he press the bell on the tall wall that separated Julia's house with the world.

Next, there was a creck on the gate flung opened by his beloved Julia, a beautiful girl with shiny green eyes. Then, smiled to him. Then, without staring into her beautiful eye, he put the letter in her hand and then, he ran back to his home as he did not want to see her tears after she read his letter. Although his home only one kilometer from that bungalow, the way back seemed to be so far.

Then, he reached his home and felt very relieved as all his problems was settled down and his family would never received any insult anymore. In addition, their neighbour also would never talked about them again because he would never meet her anymore. However, he still loved her until the end of his life.

The, suddenly, there was a loud bang on the door and it was flung opened by Julia and there was tears pouring down from her big eyes. Next, Julia shouted ‘How could you do this to me ! I hate you, Romy!’ Then, as fast as lightening, she took out a gun from her pocket and pointed it on her head.

However, Ramy could not do anything to stop her and the bang! Bang! Then, she fell on the floor and Romy quickly ran to get her. However, she was breathless. Therefore, Romy felt very guilty and there was nothing he could do except to follow his Julia. Then, he took the gun from Julia's hand " I'll follow you", and then there was a loud bang that ended their love story forever and ever.

Izwan
Sarah
Diyana
Norhidayah

19 comments:

~byha~ said...

I hoped the ending was an happy ending..if only they were tough enough to stand for their love..

nik said...

its climax not so interesting..huhu

andromeda said...

who wrote this essay???
there was a little spelling mistake...like 'kilometer' which suppose to be 'kilometre'..
hehe...

SunFlower said...

I love this story.But,there are a lot mispelling.Improve yourself ok.Chowww!!!

Anonymous said...

mind ur spelling
i was looking forward for a happy ending story when i started reading
but its ok
lets hope not to be like them

pancake said...

a love and tragic story ..just like "Romeo and Juliet" ...and yeah, I agree with Andromeda..got a little misspelling....

aikawa said...

The ending of this story is not suitable..because there are so dramatically..However the whole story is quite good,although there are some misspelling!!erm..it's that Remy or Romy??

aikawa said...

opps..I also had wrong spelling..not Remy actually but Ramy..

seera said...

yar..i agree with nik..i didn't like the ending of this story..it's same like 'Romeo n Juliet'story but the different is she died because of the poison.one more thing,if u love someone just fighting for love.

L-kun said...

i'm glad that the ending was sad ending because other stories ended up happily...

Anonymous said...

bravo2...
a lot of transitons signal were used...
send my regards to izwan..

e_one said...

Fuhh, very interesting story. Congratulation for this group, hehehe

e_one said...

Tq izwan, be the best

pOkoK kLaPe said...

good!!!!
dis stry make my heart beat more faster...duuno why...huuu...
i mus be u wan..
i know...

mektok said...

the hero and heroin are dead????? ohhhh...No...So sad.........

blueberrry said...

they were dead,oh noo..i agree with seera,i think they should find an inisiative to save their love.think first be4 take such an action...

NaiRein said...

why i think that the story is funny? maybe coz of the way they solve their problem..... anyway,gud try...

dr_love said...

some grammatical errors and spelling. do mind on spelling. but why is the ending like that? i thought it would be a happy ending(i'm agree with byha).

arissa said...

Although this essay is not so interesting but i still love it.Let's improve our writing skill!! We can do it.