Tuesday, 28 August 2007

sc1,group1

Opening story line:

Story 1: SHe pointed the gub at me and said, "How could you!"...

She pointed the gun at me and said, "How could you!"... Next,she started to talk about why she was doing that to me. "Although you are my best friend,I till can not accept that you are his girlfriend. You already know that I love him so much and I'll do anything for him so he will be mine.

However,I don't think it is my falt because Brad Pitt fall in love with me,not her. In addition,I am more sexy and preety than Jennifer. Therefore,Iam more suitable to be Brad's girlfriend. "Angelina,you are the worst friend I have aver had in my life. There are lots of other handsome guys out there like Tom Cruise,Keanu Reeves and Collin Farrel. But why do you still choose Brad to be your boy friend?!".

Then,Jennifer started to cry. So,it was an advantage for me to ascape from her. so,I tried to lose the rope on my hand and I succeed. However,she noticed about my escape and we started to fight with each other. Although she has a gun,but I don't care as long as I can escape my self. In Additin,Ihave skills in fighting that I got from Tomb Rider's movie.

I tried to take the gun from her. However,she hold the gun strongly and suddenly we heared a loud bang.BOOM! Then,I saw Jennifer's stomach was bleeding. I was so shocked! I called the ambulance but Jennifer died before the ambulance arrived.

Although the incident happened 5 years ago,but it is still fresh in my mind because she was my best friend. Jennifer had passed away. Therefore,there were no more barrier between Brad and me. So,we live happily aver after.


- Mardhiah
- Safura
- Zaharah
- Sumaiyah
- Najmi

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

emm..there are many misspelling in this essay.
who typed this essay..???

Anonymous said...

there are a lot of misspelling..ish3..

SunFlower said...

For me,this is an interesting story.Unfortunately,there are some mispelling..Try again....

Anonymous said...

big fans of hollywood i guess???
interesting story..
using popular names in ur story
i might try it someday

Anonymous said...

This story interesting..wow,Jennifer is so bad!!She looks like doesn't regret about her friend death...but there are lot of misspelling!!

andromeda said...

ya..many spelling mistakes..
i think you watch movie a lot..
but still a good story..
keep on going..

pAnCakE said...

huh..it's TrUE that there is A lot OF sPEelLIng mistAke but IT's jUST The tYping errOR..I tHink.. wHatEVER, it is an intEreSTING StORY,rIGHT?..

seera said...

i'm so sorry for the spelling mistake..we will checking first before we send to this blog..n thank you for all the comments given..

aikawa said...

U guys such a big fan of Hollywood I guess..erm quite interesting but if u make this story much longer,it will look nice..erm I know u must be hurried to send this essay right!!

aie said...

ya2 a lot of misspelling but that could be improved right? i think you should try to describe the character and the venue specifically in order to make your essay more interesting.
and also try to write in sequence because i dont understand how the story is portrayed at first.
gambate kudasai...!

L-kun said...

the name was used to attract people to read this essay..hu3x

it seems like we have to choose another people to type our essay next time..ngee..(there is also misspelling in my name!!!)

Anonymous said...

u all make me laugh...

pOkoK kLaPe said...

why short??
lazy ei...

e_one said...

Not too short, but quite long.. hehuhu

shiira said...

pkok klape.. i agree with you.this story is so short.. make it long next time okkk...

blueberrry said...

such a good story,but quite short and there's some spelling mistakes.keep on trying..chaiyok2..

mektok said...

you use names of hollywood celebrities...Keep on trying to type correctly... Aja aja fighting!!!!!!!!!

NaiRein said...

you all make me lough! hahaha