Friday, 14 September 2007

DESCRIPTION FROM A FIXED POINT

As soon as i entered the kitchen, my attentions was immediatly drown to the foods on the cabinet.It is full with maggi,milo,oat and many more.It is like mini giant and at the left of cabinet is sink.

3 comments:

kucing_red said...

theres a spelling mistake.... it should be immediately not immideatly....sorry... i don't know how to highlight the mistake...huhuhuhuhuhuhu.....

chocolate said...

Beside the sink there are many dishes that have been washed. huhu....I don;t get any idea to continue this essay.....

dr_love said...

so many huhu from the redcat and chocolate.
this essay is so short but the writer initiated the story in quite an attractive way. you can have a more interesting essay if you keep on writing. there could be more things to say in describing your kitchen. like mini giant eh?