Thursday, 20 September 2007

IDOL

Comments on sample essays
1. Mother
2. Grandma

11 comments:

arissa said...

congratulation. The story is very nice. i love it.Do you love your granny very much? Your granny is the great one. Continue writing like this and improve your skill.

luzclarita said...

congrata my friends.....
(mother)the way you convey your story is so nice.I like it. Your mum is so great.......
(granny)Your story is so touching...and your granny is so great too....

tariq_ziad said...

(granny)

nice usage of simple word...really got into the flow of the story..

(to the writer)
i think i've read this essay somewhere..hehe..

L-kun said...

i like both essay..but i think the mother essay made me want to read it again and again because both of it contents and language are good

syahid said...

mother
i love it so much... i can imagine how the writer admirer her mother so much... it makes me keep read and read...

granny
i think the writer must know his granny very well and make him proud of her. but are you serious your granny is very good at math? keeps me wonder...

ronaldo;) said...

granny;
i agree with syahid..i'm also wonder about his grandma is good at maths..hehehe

seera said...

i like the essay about my mother because i can see how the writer show her feeling to her mother through the essay..well done..

aNDroMedA :) said...

I like both the essay especially about the mother..and about the grandma..i like it also..although he used simple english, the essay is still good..well done

nick said...

the essay about my mother had touch my heart..it make me wonder about my mother.i will try to create an essay about my mother better than her essay...

kucing_red said...

both of the essays are good....keep ur good work

asia said...

you make me fell in love with your mama too.however, i lovemy mother more.
-for your grandma ,i'm sure she'll be glad if she finds out that you write about.keep writing